Score: 10

"..."

submission: Sushi City Girl (demo)

date: November 19, 2009

How is everything you make so catchy. O_O

I usually try to leave reviews with constructive criticism.. but I have nothing to say. xD

Score: 10

"Win."

submission: Chaoz Fantasy(ParagonX9 RMX)

date: November 19, 2009

Orchestral part at the beginning won me over already.. haha.
I like the beachside cut in the middle, but it's kinda odd in between here. xD

I, unlike everyone else it seems, really liked the long intro. :D
I think you did a great job making this song your own.
I loved it. :)

Score: 10

"Simple and elegant. :D"

submission: Mario's Elevator

date: November 19, 2009

Bossa nova feel? Yes. xD
Mario + Jazz = win.

Nice syncopation in the keys and sidestick rim taps. :D
Also, the melody sounds a looot like a section Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer at 1:11."

"Rudolph with your nose so bright/
won't you guide my sleigh tonight."

That part. xD

Either way, still an awesome song. :)

Score: 6

"First of all."

submission: .Aspiration. [Trance]

date: November 19, 2009

I hear a lot of stock Nexus samples.. :p
They are good to use, but if you are going to sample, at least change them to what -you- want them to sound like.

The lead is far too loud over the bass. The kick gets drowned out when it comes in.. and the melodies aren't very rhythmic or melodically challenging. ><
Structure is almost absent, and the piano in the end comes in randomly as the lead that was playing the whole song disappears in less than 5 seconds.

Need to work on EQ, melodies, layering, and build-up/structure.
Sorry if I sound harsh, but I'm trying to help.. it's not bad for one of your first songs. :D

Orsa

P.S. Also, this isn't trance. It's more of dance/hands up! xD

Score: 10

"Damn good."

submission: (WF1)/F-777 un-named Demo.

date: November 13, 2009

Dude, this is brilliant.
I know I should have asked first, but I just threw this into FL Studio and made a backbeat to it. Is that okay with you? xD
All credits to you of course.

Score: 10

"Ahhhh."

submission: [DN] Lucid Dreaming [Collab]

date: November 11, 2009

So..
chill.

Honestly, I'm a college student.. and I've had a tough past week. Made my day so much more peaceful. Thank you.

Score: 10

"Amazing!"

submission: Fall

date: November 11, 2009

I don't hear music on NG with vox, and this is just amazing..
Great voice man, what voice VSTs do you use? I can sing decently, but I never knew how to add good effects and stufff. Also, what mic are you using?

Only suggestion, your voice is really drowning out the drums for a lot of parts. Your voice is really good, so it's not bad, but maybe your should mix your drums a tad higher and then turn up the volume on your vox just a tad. :D

Amazing, besides that. :D

Score: 8

"Cooool."

submission: [LK] Sound Of My Dream RMX

date: November 7, 2009

I liked it a lot, especially the change from the vox to the gated synth right in the beginning. However, the piano doubling the vox is kinda repetitive and the Kick and Snare are suuuper drowned out by the lead. Some of the notes don't seem to fit in the melody at times. For example you go high in the lead a few times, and I expect it to go higher because of the chords of the song, but it drops back again.. it's sorta anticlimactic in that way.
This song could be really, really awesome.. I think. :D

Score: 8

"Cool,"

submission: Ravers Fantasy DNB

date: October 24, 2009

but what it going at like 1:39?
Vox in a different key + a Dubstep Bass? :p

Besides that weird part, I think you are really beast at D'nB. But, I still listen to Eternity a few times a week. Your masterpiece, imo. :D

Score: 8

"Eight for catchiness. (7+1)"

submission: [CS] RaveLeNation New Mix

date: October 24, 2009

Lotta distortion.
PM me, if you want to know how to get rid of it. It's actually pretty simple. :p
Nice melody, but 1:58-2:16.. this isn't hardstyle (don't get me wrong, hardstyle is my FAV), haha. :D
Need i say the word variety again though? :p

Instead of the CH on the upbeat at the end, try an OH for the more classic sound.
The filtering up out was kinda hard to hear, maybe make it ground at the end?
Same FX from our collab.. :p Change it up some. :)
Nice opening, btw, I liked it.